Juliet Parfitt

      @zsofit, your activities are nicely staged and under learner control, and the information is clearly presented using the accordion tool. I like that you have embedded H5P and the extension activities – much better than just having a link. I also like your dark text against the light background. It’s good that you have highlighted key words in your explanations. For accessibility, it is better to use bold for this rather than italics.

      e.g. We usually make comparisons with than.

      I’m saying nothing about the orange!